Radiant Speech - Mark I

- drawn February? or March? '05 -
ink on paper

confused?
i'm going to make a font for the Radiant Speech in my comic. this is the first draft of the characters that will be used.
jocelyncee, linquist-at-large is assisting me in this project! many thanks, jo!
i'd like for it to be a working language, i.e., you could actually use it! but since the Radiant's vocal cords are quite different from our own, we could never speak it properly. the full character set will change from it's final form. i've never made a font before, or a conlang for that matter, so this will be a learning experience.
any feedback on this project would be helpful and welcome.
thanks!